This is in response to Kay's Junkyard Quote 4: "I hate when I see cars with no bumper. It's like they're missing their mouth or they have a cleft palette."
This is an intriguing statement...it sounds like the beginning to a story about a car mechanic or someone who enjoys fixing cars because these "problems" irritate them. That is the quirky detail that Dr. Davidson says creates the interest or the questions in the reader. I would love to see this statement used somewhere in your writing...it holds a lot of interest.
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