This entry is using the metaphor substitution on page 99 of the Writing Poetry book:
The idea of this is to combine the stock phrase with an unusual ending...
1. calling from the far shore of her last date
2. cutting down the briar of their hopelessness
3. burning the wood of his latest disaster
4. stockpiling for the winter of her pop song
5. smug by the fire of his mother's voice
not sure how well that worked...
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