Saturday, October 19, 2013

Improv Post Three Week Eight

This is an improv of "Starlight Scope Myopia" by Yusef Komunyakaa. I really like the last line "seeing the full moon loaded onto an oxcart"

Tonight, I can imagine seeing the full moon 
loaded onto an oxcart through the window
of your hotel room. The oxcart isn't attached
to an ox, and I say this aloud and you laugh,
but the moon doesn't care that it can't go 
anywhere.

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